Writing ยท Sales / Negotiation


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Between 1947 and 1951, Levitt & Sons built 17,447 nearly identical homes on Long Island. Ten to twelve a day. They sold.
They sold because soldiers home from the war were living in garages and chicken coops. Buyers had nowhere else to go.
This week a friend asked me to read his job ad. Director of Operations.
So I read 23 more ads for the same position.
22 say you'll "oversee." 22 say you'll "ensure." Six different companies wrote "driving operational excellence." Whatever that really means. Two Director-level ads say you must be able to lift 25 pounds. Presumably the job description.
Zero named a founder or had a pulse.
Swipe through. I blacked out the company names. You won't miss them.
Picking who runs your buildings when you aren't looking is one of the biggest calls an owner makes. And we hand it to a template. Somebody pulls last year's description, HR runs it past legal, a committee sands off anything with a pulse, and out comes a list of duties.
A job ad is marketing. You aren't documenting a position. You're selling one.
When every ad reads the same, the candidate compares the money. The biggest company in your market is built to win that fight. And 13 of the 23 didn't show the money at all. So the candidate is left comparing logos.
Levitt had a housing shortage on his side. You're hiring someone who can say no.
My friend has something the big guys can't copy. His father read about a beat-up property in the newspaper and bought it out of foreclosure. He figured he'd take better care of it than the bank. The son left the military to come home and run it.
None of that was in the ad. "Family-owned" was.
Tell the real story. Say what they'll own, in numbers. Say what a big company can't offer: a seat next to the owner, no VP in between, a piece of what they build.
Write it for the one person you want to call you. Not the 300 who might click apply.